Check out my latest book I've been working on! Its called A dark soul. I'm on chapter 7 of 31. Here is a sneak peek.
One day in a forest there lived a boy named Max Blue. He was a very friendly boy that was about 5 years old he had 3 older brothers named James, Alex, and Austin he also had 1 younger sister named Alyssa. James was the oldest then came Alex and Austin was in the middle Max came next and Alyssa was the youngest. And then a couple of years later when Max was 8 his parents got killed in a car accident. But James was 15 and old enough to take care of his brothers and sister. And one day Max walked outside and he heard a noise and then all the sudden his eyes turned bright yellow and he turned around, he saw this red creature with two horns on his head, flaming red eyes, and some very sharp claws on his hands and feet charging at him then all the sudden Max’s yellow eyes turned orange and he started charging at the creature then his orange eyes turned red and Max somehow started attacking. Trying to stop Max kicked the beast and it fell on the ground weakened. And then Max’s eyes turned back to normal “what happened” said max as he ran home he told his brothers but not one of them believed him not even his sister. Then at dinner Max kept looking out the window wondering where that beast came from and how he did that thing that really weakened the beast and if the beast would ever come back.
Why aren’t you eating dinner James asked? You wouldn’t believe me Max said. I would believe anything you say James said. I ALREADY TOLD YOU! Max said. Oh so it’s the “power” thing again huh. YES IT’S THE POWER THING AGAIN IT’S A TRUE STORY! Max said as he marched to his room. In his room Max got an idea. Max went down stairs and said James. WHAT!? Asked James if you don’t believe I have a power…………………………………………… Max heard a voice NO it said. James said what if I don’t believe your power. Uh if you don’t believe my power you uh “you get a piece of cheese cake” “what” James asked without noticing his Sister Alyssa screaming I don’t believe your power I don’t believe your power. Max said I’m making cheese cake James said make it pistachio everyone yelled boo no boo no boo no boo no boo no fine strawberry they yelled raspberry fine raspberry. Everyone cheered yummm Alyssa yelled I’m a “kitty cat”! Max made the cheese cake and ran outside. He ran out by the creek (In his swim suit) and jumped in! SPLASH he swam as deep as he could all the way to the bottom then he saw something moving toward him. It was a………………………………………BULL SHARK! He swam and swam his eyes turned yellow uh-oh he said he turned around his eyes turned orange he swam to it his eyes turned red and he banged the shark down then he somehow turned his eyes green and then he teleported back to his house wow he said as he walked inside. This power is awesome.
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Brandon,
Last summer, I promised my daughter that I would not just read for work but that I would read for pleasure. I looked through her books and I found one called Fablehaven. My wife had read it and wanted me to read it also. I agreed. I couldn't put the thing down until it was completely read!
I loved Fablehaven so much that I used it in my speech for my daughter's 6th grade promotion to illustrate how Seth tries to outsmart the rules and his misadventures usually end up in disaster. Many times Seth is wise in his own eyes.
We are big fans so keep writing so that I can keep reading. I just bought Candshop Wars so that should keep me busy for at least a few days. God bless,
Robert Allen
I LOVE YOUR BOOKS I HOPE THERE WILL BE A FABLEHAVE MOVIE
Funny...I haven't watched TV all week due to reading books 1-3. :)
This book is the gnarliest book I have ever read!! I am totally looking forward toward your next novel! Look, it's a cyclops with a unibrow bD. Tadaa!
Hint: look at it sideways if you haven't found out already.
May 27, 2008 2:31 PM
This is one of the things that I love about the books! I am not ashamed to lend it to friends, I don't have to warn them about any offensive material, I don't feel embarassed telling my parents what's in it, it's totally clean! I love that! Thank you for making the books this way! It's so wonderful that the world is calling attention to that.